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2022年大學(xué)英語六級滿分作文賞析：你喜歡健康還是財富

Health and Wealth, Which Do You Prefer?

" Health is wealth!". This is an old saying which the majority applaud. As a rule, the wealthieryou are, the weaker is your health, but this cannot be applied to all.

To begin with, a person that has health can afford to challenge all hardships. For example, manual workers are usually stout and energetic. With their energy, they earn their living. Although such an occupation brings little reward as compared with the energy they haveexerted, they enjoy life whatever things may be.

Moreover, business is based on health. Students in good health can absorb knowledge morereadily. In good health, scientists can tackle complex technical problems and achieve moresuccess.

Frequently we find millionaires cling close to their doctors for they seldom have enoughexercises to bring forth better health. Their lack of exercises slackens the readiness of growth ofthe antibodies to resist the at tack of diseases. So, my argue is that health is more importantthan wealth for if we do not have health, what can we benefit from wealth?

CET6六級作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

·Health is wealth

* More wealth, weaker health

·Good health can afford to challenge all hardships, e.g.

* Manual workers

* Businessmen

* Students

* Scientists

* Millionaires lack health

·Conclusion

No health, no wealth

CET6六級作文內(nèi)容分析：

本文是一篇議論文, 文中作者的觀點鮮明, 全文均圍繞這一觀點展開, 每段的第一都是主題句, 結(jié)論句與第一句呼應(yīng), 這種首尾呼應(yīng)的寫作技巧很值得學(xué)習(xí)。

CET6六級作文萬能句型：

applaud v. 贊同

cannot be applied to all 并不適用于所有人

hardship n. 困難

manual worker 體力勞動者

stout and energetic 健壯而精力充沛

earn their living 謀生

occupation n. 職業(yè)

the energy they have exerted 所出的力

absorb v. 吸收

tackle v. 解決, 處理

cling close to their doctors 總離不開醫(yī)生

slackens the readiness of growth of the antibodies 放松體內(nèi)增長抗體的準備