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2022年大學(xué)英語六級(jí)滿分作文賞析：種種承諾

When I first look at the cartoon, I can't help laughing at the hen who seems to be seriouslymaking a foolis h announcement to the public that she always lays eggs, smooth and roundand never without eggwhite and yolk in side the shell. However, when I start to study thecartoon more carefully, I find something significant in it and gradually I come to understandthe author's intention.

Nowadays, almost all trades and professions are repeatedly making sincere promises to people: government people assure that they are noble and clean and will serve people heart andsoulmer chants smilingly swear that the products they sell are of superior quality, genuineinstead of false, life-time maintenance guaranteed and the cheapest market price; advertiserstake pains to recommend miracle drugs and make-youbeautiful cosmetics, etc. Year afteryear, such promises are repeated. I wonder why they take so much trouble to boast oudlyabout their obligations and duties. People believed them at first, but gradually becameawakened because they have found some dishonesty in such bombing promises.

" Actions speak louder than words." The hen is foolish enough to make her egg-promise, whyshouldn't those nonsense- maker s become cleverer?

CET6六級(jí)作文結(jié)構(gòu)分析：

·Paragraph 1 —

* Interpretation of the car toon

* My understanding

·Paragraph 2 —

* Promises made by all trades and professions

* Awakening of the people

·Paragraph 3 —

*"Actions speak louder than words."

CET6六級(jí)作文內(nèi)容分析：

本文是一篇漫畫作文, 畫的寓意是“各行各業(yè)的種種承諾本應(yīng)是自身的職責(zé), 卻要大肆渲染, 無疑是多此一舉”, 其愚蠢程度不亞于圖中“ 母雞下蛋的承諾”。這類題型必須把握其寓意( hidden meaning) , 方能切中主題。本文第一段用兩句解釋了 漫畫, 其開頭不落俗套, 文筆幽默。第二段切入主題, 例舉各種“ 多此一舉”的承諾, 筆調(diào)生動(dòng), 最后一句是有力的揭露。結(jié)尾段 中引用了一句成語并奉勸承諾者不要像母雞那樣愚蠢本題曾是一次考研寫作題, 漫畫取自于21 世紀(jì)報(bào), 作者借題自行撰文。

CET6六級(jí)作文萬能句型：

car toon n . 漫畫

can't help + -ing 禁不住

lay eggs 下蛋

eggwhite n. 蛋白

yolk n. 蛋黃

all trades and professions 各行各業(yè)

serve people heart and soul 全心全意為人民服務(wù)

swear v. 發(fā)誓

superior quality 優(yōu)質(zhì)

genuine instead of false 真貨而不是假貨

life-time maintenance guaranteed 保證終身維修

take pains to + v. 費(fèi)盡心思去

miracle drugs 神藥

make-you-beautiful cosmetics “使你美”化妝品

year after year 年復(fù)一年

boast about 吹噓

obligation n. 責(zé)職, 義務(wù)

dishonesty in such bombing promises 轟炸性的承諾中的欺騙

Actions speak louder than words. 聽其言更要觀其行

nonsense-makers 說廢話者