星期六，我來到了一年級作文提高班，沒一會兒，老師也來了．她一來，就怒氣沖沖地對我說：“高峰，你出去！”那話非常嚴厲，似乎容不得半點商量．我當時嚇了一跳，心想：

On Saturday, I came to the first grade composition improvement class. Soon, the teacher also came. As soon as she came, she said to me angrily," Gao Feng, you go out!" It was very harsh, and I couldn't seem to discuss it. I was shocked and thought:

咦？怎么回事？老師為什么叫我出去？我沒犯什么錯呀？

Why? What's going on? Why did the teacher ask me out? What's wrong with me?

我到了外面，老師俯下身來，對我講：“我這次想讓同學們寫一篇作文，讓你做一下示范，委屈你了．”語氣比剛才親切了許多．我想：做什么示范呀？剛想問，老師就進了教室．我模模糊糊地聽到老師讓同學們回答什么問題，接著就聽見同學們的一陣吵鬧聲，大約過了兩三分鐘，老師又讓我進了教室.

When I got outside, the teacher leaned over and said to me," I want my classmates to write a composition this time, and let you do a demonstration. I've wronged you." the tone was much more cordial than before. I thought: what demonstration? As soon as I wanted to ask, the teacher came into the classroom. I vaguely heard what questions the teacher asked the students to answer. Then I heard a noise from the students. After about two or three minutes, the teacher let me in again

一進教室，同學們就目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著我看，我很是不解。等我一轉(zhuǎn)身，看到了黑板，才恍然大悟，原來黑板上寫著幾條題目，都是有關我的問題，比如“眼睛是雙眼皮還是單眼皮？”、“穿什么顏色的褲子，鞋子又是什么顏色？”等等，這正是同學們盯著我看的原因。老師真是用心良苦啊！這時，老師轉(zhuǎn)過身，在黑板上用紅粉筆寫下了一行醒目的大字：仔細觀察、抓住重點，做一個有心人。是寫好作文的關鍵之一。并要求我們要用心去記住這句話。

As soon as I entered the classroom, the students stared at me. I was puzzled. As soon as I turned around and saw the blackboard, I suddenly realized that there were several questions written on the blackboard, all about me, such as" is the eye double eyelid or single eyelid?"" What color are pants and shoes?" Wait, that's why the students stare at me. The teacher is really diligent! At this time, the teacher turned around and wrote a line of bold words on the blackboard with a red chalk pen: carefully observe, grasp the key points, and be a thoughtful person. It is one of the keys to write a good composition. And ask us to remember this sentence with our heart.

這堂作文課真有趣??！

This composition class is so interesting!