星期六，我來(lái)到了一年級(jí)作文提高班，沒(méi)一會(huì)兒，老師也來(lái)了．她一來(lái)，就怒氣沖沖地對(duì)我說(shuō)：“高峰，你出去！”那話非常嚴(yán)厲，似乎容不得半點(diǎn)商量．我當(dāng)時(shí)嚇了一跳，心想：

On Saturday, I came to the first grade composition improvement class. Soon, the teacher also came. As soon as she came, she said to me angrily," Gao Feng, you go out!" It was very harsh, and I couldn't seem to discuss it. I was shocked and thought:

咦？怎么回事？老師為什么叫我出去？我沒(méi)犯什么錯(cuò)呀？

Why? What's going on? Why did the teacher ask me out? What's wrong with me?

我到了外面，老師俯下身來(lái)，對(duì)我講：“我這次想讓同學(xué)們寫(xiě)一篇作文，讓你做一下示范，委屈你了．”語(yǔ)氣比剛才親切了許多．我想：做什么示范呀？剛想問(wèn)，老師就進(jìn)了教室．我模模糊糊地聽(tīng)到老師讓同學(xué)們回答什么問(wèn)題，接著就聽(tīng)見(jiàn)同學(xué)們的一陣吵鬧聲，大約過(guò)了兩三分鐘，老師又讓我進(jìn)了教室.

When I got outside, the teacher leaned over and said to me," I want my classmates to write a composition this time, and let you do a demonstration. I've wronged you." the tone was much more cordial than before. I thought: what demonstration? As soon as I wanted to ask, the teacher came into the classroom. I vaguely heard what questions the teacher asked the students to answer. Then I heard a noise from the students. After about two or three minutes, the teacher let me in again

一進(jìn)教室，同學(xué)們就目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著我看，我很是不解。等我一轉(zhuǎn)身，看到了黑板，才恍然大悟，原來(lái)黑板上寫(xiě)著幾條題目，都是有關(guān)我的問(wèn)題，比如“眼睛是雙眼皮還是單眼皮？”、“穿什么顏色的褲子，鞋子又是什么顏色？”等等，這正是同學(xué)們盯著我看的原因。老師真是用心良苦??！這時(shí)，老師轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，在黑板上用紅粉筆寫(xiě)下了一行醒目的大字：仔細(xì)觀察、抓住重點(diǎn)，做一個(gè)有心人。是寫(xiě)好作文的關(guān)鍵之一。并要求我們要用心去記住這句話。

As soon as I entered the classroom, the students stared at me. I was puzzled. As soon as I turned around and saw the blackboard, I suddenly realized that there were several questions written on the blackboard, all about me, such as" is the eye double eyelid or single eyelid?"" What color are pants and shoes?" Wait, that's why the students stare at me. The teacher is really diligent! At this time, the teacher turned around and wrote a line of bold words on the blackboard with a red chalk pen: carefully observe, grasp the key points, and be a thoughtful person. It is one of the keys to write a good composition. And ask us to remember this sentence with our heart.

這堂作文課真有趣?。?/p>

This composition class is so interesting!