讀后續(xù)寫法最早由王初明教授提出來的是結(jié)合閱讀理解進行寫作的一種外語教學方法. 由于蘊含豐富的促學理念, 讀后續(xù)寫在近幾年受到了教育界的廣泛關注，接下來小編告訴你高中英語讀后續(xù)寫技巧。

1.內(nèi)容

在閱卷過程中，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，一部分考生沒有讀懂原文，如不認識bear spray，不理解a bright red cloud enveloped the animal，沒有理清人物關系，誤認為Paul與Mac是好朋友：這部分考生由于閱讀能力直接影響到續(xù)寫的發(fā)揮。另外一部分考生則是大面積抄寫試卷中的閱讀理解或是完形填空等處的語句;還有些考生描寫心理活動和場景過多，缺乏具體描寫，導致故事不夠連貫，不夠完整。

2.語言

從評卷結(jié)果來看，考生出現(xiàn)的問題偏向于刻意追求運用高級、新穎的詞匯，強行運用復雜句型等語法結(jié)構，而忽略了與原文語言環(huán)境的符合度和連貫度。同時出現(xiàn)了一些單詞拼寫錯誤等，尤其是副詞的拼寫和不規(guī)則動詞的拼寫錯誤，如disappointly，to his surprised等。更有甚者用套路作文，這與讀后續(xù)寫的全新創(chuàng)作宗旨相違背。

3.邏輯

①違背生活真實。如在緊張的人狼大戰(zhàn)環(huán)境下，有的考生卻寫兩人在拉家常。②人物關系混亂。如增加了一些人物，讓故事變得更加復雜;把Paul與Mac看成是原先認識的;有些故事的結(jié)局并沒有交代如何處理狼。③兩段的開頭語理解不到位，以及兩段之間銜接不夠，也帶來了很多故事上的混亂。比如第一段的The car abruptly stopped in front of him，學生理解為是Mac要求他停車等。

4.其他問題

閱卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)很多考生錯誤地將一個單詞隨意移行。因為單詞移行規(guī)則很復雜，建議考生還是不要拆字為好。另外，閱卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)很多標點錯誤，以下幾點需注意：英語中沒有頓號，分割句中并列成分多用逗號，如She slowly，carefully，deliberately moved the box;英文的句號是實心點(.);英文的省略號是三個點(...)，位置在行底。

01. Noticing Susan’s unhappiness, Rose secretly suggested making a crown with flowers to please her.

02. As the family walked to the door to leave, the mother came running back, gave me a hug and whispered, “Thanks for being our angels today.”

03. Feeling familiar with the voice, she turns round and saw…

04. A small smile may make a big difference.

05. It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty (= no matter what difficulty) we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.

06. What happened today made me realize that forgiveness is a kind of virtue.

07. She explained that her mother was badly ill last night, which contributed to her fault.

08. I will treasure/value our friendship forever.

09. Jennifer’s sleepy eyes opened wide and her face wore a smile that brightened up the whole room.

10. She understood that her daughter meant much more than anything else in the world.

Group two (11-20)

11. Dad cleared his throat and said in a serious voice, “….”

12. Hoping it could be sent to one who badly needed it.

13. At that time, you were badly in need of money to pay the fee and you had to….Then why didn’t you keep it for yourself?

14. Although I don’t have much money, I can live happily; but if I lose honesty, I won’t be happy any more. In a long run, I will be a loser.

15. I kept avoiding eye contact with him, ….

16. I made up my mind to find out/figure out how to fit in with them/how to get along with them.

17. The teacher is paying particular/close attention to Mary, who is constantly putting forward questions in class in order to rank among the best pupils.

18. It took her great courage to tell dad that….

19. This will be a great financial sacrifice for her parents who have already been paying for her college.

20. I left the site in tears. In a split second the drunk driver had torn the passer-by into pieces.